jueves, marzo 01, 2007

When I saw You

I saw you in the
crowd and you
seemed as the

genius artist
made you.

Your body was carved
meticulously, I want
paint with my tongue
and not avoid any place
to walk in.

1 comentario:

Baakanit dijo...

seem(seemed) En pasado.

"made it for the
genius artist."

Esa parte no tiene sentido, ordena bien las palabras.


"I want
painting with my tongue
and not avoid any place
to walk in."

Sé lo que quieres decir, pero en inglés no se diría de esa forma.

"I would like to paint you with my tongue without leaving any blank spot.

Bueno algo así, buen intento viejo!